what i do after school

After school I go home and watch TV I hang out with my friends, angellek and jhonice then I talk on the phone”, to jhonice played on the computer “played with the little kids hold the babies” or sit on the porch or do my back bend” I went outside the boys, Tyler” and Tyler” were throwing little basket balls at us really hard” then I did my cart wheels then my back bend then I sat on the porch with jhonice” then went to see my neighbor Melissa” then went to see my sister, Dominique” and my nephew, Israel then went inside and watched TV “and did my homework, for math after that I fell asleep yesterday I went to the mall with my cousin jasmine,” we had so much fun there then we went to her house, and hung out and watched TV then I went home and sat on the porch with my neighbors, teddy and Elizabeth “ and I went to my sisters house to see my nephew, Israel and I went to quick trip to get ice cream” hung out with my neighbors and that’s all I did yesterday I sat on the porch watched my neighbors kids tempy “and eternity”
went upstairs to my sisters house watched my nephew I talked to the neighbors went to went to my old house” and went back home and talked 2 jhonice and angellek” on the phone and went to do my grandma” a favor then went to talk to every one” called my cousin, jasmine but she didn’t answer, the phone” so I went outside the fence to talk to my friend josh and seen his baby Dakota” and went back inside for the night watched TV did my homework” took a shower and then I got tired text, all my friends for a little bite” and went to play on the computer, got on my space to check my mail” then I did my neighbor a favor then kept throwing the ball at my neighbors” teddy and tj” then went to talk to talk to my sister upstairs and got something to eat” at McDonalds then I txt my friend” Mercedes and she told me that my other friend Gaby made me an other my space” so I asked her what it was and she said that she” didn’t know what I thank I after school I thank what im going to do who am I going to talk to and hang out with when I get to my house and when I get there there’s a lot of people out side so I wonder whose guna talk to me and who im guna talk to when I first walk in the gate every one looks at me so I think what did I do why are all of them people looking at me for what did I do then every body starts talking to me and I thought I did something wrong but I didn’t they all just wanted to talk me to I thank its weird but they don’t they say im weird and I say no you. by elissa valdez