Mrs. Ott's Language Arts Class

Elisha McBride
Language Arts 6-7th hour
Mrs. Ott
September 24, 2009
It was a memorable place!

It was a place where I went to be alone, where I sat on the bed and read. It was a place I went when I felt sad or angry, where I punched my pillow and cried. It was a place where I could Be myself; I danced how I wanted and wore what I wanted. It was a place where I could call it my own; I made sure no one came in.
When you go in my private place, you will see the ordinary. A bed, a dresser, a closet, a TV, and an entertainment center. As soon as you walk in you will see my bed under my windows, my entertainment center right next to the door on the right, my closet on the left on the other wall, and my dresser on the right wall at the foot of my bed. I have posters on my right wall. It’s covered with twilight posters and a few Taylor Lautner posters. Right above my bed I have a poster of heath ledger as the joker from batman. It says “Why so serious?” It’s awesome. Right next to my bed is a nightstand table. It has my DS on it and my alarm clock and my other junk. On the dresser are a lava lamp and some seashells and my leadership things. My closet is filled with my shoes on the floor, the first rack is my kinds of pants (sweats, jeans, etc.) and the second rack is filled with my shirts and the last rack is covered in my jackets. I have a guitar in my closet. On my bed is a comforter and a Sycuan casino blanket I use when I read. There are two pillows with a yellow cover and another that’s black and says angel. I have a giant dog on it my dad won me at a county fair. I have a Winnie the Pooh pillow (more like a decoration pillow) and a pink one. I love my bed. I read in it everyday. I have nothing under my bed and it’s always made and my room is always as clean as I allow it.
One time my sisters decided to make my room a fighting cage.
“Rena, why do you hate him?” said Ashton.
Rena said “I hate him because he doesn’t love you. I just know it.”
Ashton said “You don’t know anything ABOUT HIM!”
“Oh yeah? Then why did I see him with your “best friend”?”
Ashton started to hit her. Rena blocked her.
“Get Off of me, you.”

I was trying to stop them so they wouldn’t break anything. I didn’t have much success. So instead I moved the things I wanted to keep. I started yelling at them and then my mom came in. She yelled at Ashton and Rena for almost ruining all of my things. They just stood there with smirks on their faces. When my mom left, they started fighting again! So I yelled for them to go in Rena’s room. So they left and I was overjoyed and so I fell on my bed with a deep sigh. Then I realized I had to clean my room by myself. I looked and my room looked like a tornado had swept through. I soon screamed.
Well, this was about my private place. You can probably guess what it is. Ready? My ROOM! It’s my favorite place and always will be. Well, I shared a little piece of my paradise with you. No judging! Well, don’t just stand there! Comment on it to me! Bye!