memorable place by leticia treto

Leticia Treto

Language arts 6 and 7 hour

Mrs. Ott

September 18 2009


It was a memorable place.
It was a place where I could do what ever I wanted to do, and not worry about anyone watching me. It was a place where not even my mom could find me. It was a place where I could play what ever I wanted to play. It was a place where I was free of any one telling me what to do. Their I was alone but not lonely because I was happy. The only place I could be my self and not worry.
This place was very cool to be at. In this place I felt very happy it was a big place it had a lot of space to play at. It was in our back yard the yard was very big it had lots of trees and a lot of grass space. This place was my favorite to be at. My dad told me this place was very old so it descried the bad wood. he is very kind and also very strict about what his family does, It still was a nice place to stay at.
My mom did not know were it was at so when she looked for me she never fond me. The place was hidden at the back of the yard so most of the trees covered it but it still was nice to know that their I was free.
I felt completely save and free. The place was a little high up from the ground and it was a little scary for me when I was smaller, but after I grew more it became easier and less scary for me to go their. Even do i was alone I still felt comfortable their. The place was very open it had a lot f space for me to play.
One time one of the boards broke and my foot got caught In the hole and I had to pull my leg to get it out it was not easy but I got it out ,and then I just putt a rug on top and a piece of paper that said careful boards broken.
One time my sister followed me their and found out about all I did their. So my sister kept on going their till I told her to stop or start helping fix up the broken board. She said she would not tell my mom and that she would help me with the board if I let her keep on going the place.
The place was very quite and comfortable, like a babies room at the hospital even to fall asleep in there. one time I had not gotten enough sleep at night so when I went up there I fall asleep. I had no idea what time it was so I stayed up there till nine at night.
When I got back I went up to my room and fell asleep again my room was very small and dark like a place where no light ever came in,. But when I woke up I had to tell my sister where I had bin she had her hear up in a pony tall she had bin asleep for less then 3 hours because she just kept on yawning she is very nice and also very helpful, . at but it was not a big deal because she knew already about the place.
“Where were you at “she asked at first I thought about lying to her but then I remembered about what she had said to me at the place back when the board was Brocken…”At the place you know where I spend all of my free time.””Oh then you are okay just don’t stay up their that much because mom is not here so I hsve to keep an eye on all of you okay"sure”
My mom had gone to see my grand parents at Mexico so I had to stay close to the house.she has big eyes and she is very nice when she is not mad. She is very nice to you aand will never yell at you that is the best thing about her they will be back at noon so we can go eat together okay so go take aa shower and get dressed to go .sure I said
So we went ate end got back we had lots of fun too because we had gone to the park as well.as soon as I got back I told my sister that I w all,iving and ofcorse she knew were iwould be. I went up to my favorite place in the world to spend time and started to jump on the little couch that was their and t started to think that I only wished to stay here forever. By Leticia