Toni's Story

Toni Webber
Language Arts ½ hour
Mrs. Ott
September 18, 2009

Angel (true story)

My cousin Angel lived in a haunted house with me and my family. Like my mom, dad and my older sister. Except for me and Angel everybody else were busy my mom was at the store my dad was taking nap and my sister was in her room. I and my cousin angel were playing in the front room. We were also watching Sponge Bob Square Pants it was fun we played board games, playing tag and dance of course.”Man I’m tired let’s sit down,” my cousin Angel suggested. We sat down on the floor then we looked at the wall we saw a shadow go by, “Did you see that?” I asked. “Go see if my dad and my sister are where they were, ok,” I told angel. When she came back from up stairs she said they were in the same place they were before. When we
Looked at the wall again the shadow went the other way,” There it goes follow it!”Angel said. While the shadow ran went the other way my grabbed my hand and took me with her so we followed the shadow. While we were following the shadow it went downstairs to the basement.”Come on, Toni.” “Are you nuts do you have any clue where the shadow went?”I complained.” Yes it went downstairs to the base ment.”Angel said.” We might get in trouble,” I worried.” We never were down to the basement before.”I said.
“Come on, please Toni,” Angel begged.” Fine but only for a second,” I said.” Thank you thank you Toni,” Angel said happily. When we were following the shadow we saw the shadow go through the door so we followed the shadow in the basement. We were so scared because the shadow went through the door we knew it was a ghost. “The shadow might be a ghost Toni,” My cousin Angel said. “It probably wants to show us something,” Angel made me believe. So we followed the shadow/ghost down to the basement. We were scared because no one went down there not even the people who were cleaning the house after the people died there some say that the people haunt the house when they died.”Are you sure that it’s a good idea to be down her Angel,”I asked her. When we got down there, there was blood on the walls while we looked at every wall I saw that Angel was about to scream her mouth was wide she was taking deep breaths and started squeaking her voice. While she was about to scream I saw the shadow it was coming toward us I was scared to but I kept calm. While my cousin scream was getting louder I covered her mouth so the shadow or ghost or whatever so it won’t come after us.”Don’t scream it might not come after us if you don’t,”I said to calm her down.
When the ghost was flying I saw the shadow pass us. Angel was about to faint so I caught her before she even fell on the ground. When everything got quiet we heard the front door close we knew it was my mom so we ran up stairs.”Hey I think that’s my mom come on Angel,”I said to her. We ran upstairs and hugged her and started to go upstairs to play in my room. When we got up there we saw the ghost again then we knew the crazy shadow chase wasn’t over. “Did you see that,” I asked Angel. ”Yea I did,” Angel replied.” Angel I have a feeling that this isn’t over,” I said in shock. Everything fine after while until Angel started to pick her nose. “Angel stop picking your nose,” I shouded.