Austy Kerrs Narrative

Austy Kerr
Language Arts 6/7
Mrs. Ott
September 18, 2009
I Remember
I remember my best friend Aubrey. She is tall and has dirty blonde hair it is long and pretty. She said, “Austy you are the best friend in the whole wide world”. She has big brown eyes. Aubrey is athletic. She is also very smart and she loves school. She is a bright young beautiful girl is she is a great friend.

I have another friend named Danae. She has blonde brown hair she is short. She has freckles and she is really pretty. Danae is a great friend she is always there for me. She loves her family and her friends. She is the best ever.

The other girls that were invited were Anna K., Anna D., Stephanie, Emily, and Jorja. Anna K. is a blonde with blue eyes. She is good at running and good at leadership she is a great friend because she never tells a lie. She is also very smart, last year she was in NAL that is the National Academic league. The next girl is Anna D. She is smart and very pretty she is a volley ball player and she is really, really good at sport. The next girl is Stephanie. Stephanie is a good student. She goes to Allison, but she is still a good friend. Next is Emily she is gorgeous and she is very smart I love her and her voice she is great. Last but not least is Jorja she isn’t my friend any more. Jorja is short and wide she is a snob. She wants every thing to her self. She is just not a very good friend.

It was when I turned twelve, and I went to the ice skating rink with my friends and it was very chilly inside the rink. We had lots of fun—pretending that we were real ice skaters. First we ate the cake—so delicious it tasted like heaven; it was butter cake so it had to be good.

We were playing around on the ice and then we fell on our butts and it really hurt. Danae said, “Austy this is the best party ever and that fall really hurt but it was funny”. But we just got up and started cracking up. We started skating again and this girl started laughing at us, we didn’t know why she was laughing but she was. The people that were invited were Danae, Anna D, Anna K, Jorja, and Stephanie.

Aubrey was invited but she didn’t get to because she went out of town with her family. She went to Florida with her mom, dad, grandma, and her sister. But that’s okay if she didn’t go because lots of people didn’t go like Aliyah, and Emily.

I got lots of presents I got $230, some jewelry, an ipod, a cell phone, and some makeup. I was lucky I got a cell phone and an ipod because usually I only get 1 electronic. Also I got a gift card to Claire’s it was worth 50 dollars. It was awesome.

After we skated we got tired so we all left and went to my house. At my house there was Danae, Anna D, Anna K, Stephanie, Emily, and Jorja. We played hide sand go seek in the dark, it was really fun. We also played games on the computer. We did makeovers and facials and massages. We got a little tired so we went down stairs to watch a movie. We had a very hard time choosing on a movie; Danae said “We should just watch normal TV”. Stephanie said “why didn’t you tell us before”. Anna’s said “ Were really, really hungry, so I go in the kitchen and grab three bags of chips, I grabbed Doritos, Lays, and tortilla chip because we had dip for the.

My mom was going to make us pizzas but we said that we weren’t hungry so she didn’t make them. We were watching Gorge Lopez. It was very funny. Danae and Jorja were the only ones that spent the night. The Anna’s had to go home at 12:30 at night. Stephanie had to go home because she had to go to her grandma’s house in the morning. Emily left because she never spends the night at her friend’s house because she is scared.


We still had fun even though the girls had to leave us. I am glad that I had this birthday party. It was one of the best birthday parties ever it was fun and awesome and we all ha


Thank you for listening to my story; I had a great time writing this story.


By Austy Kerr